http://book_worm5.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] book_worm5.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] shiori_makiba 2016-02-25 07:41 pm (UTC)

Sad, yet good. I'm glad they have each other to love.

I spotted a couple typos: "Because Jaime was needed him" doesn't need the "was"; "she wasn't going to lost her daddy too" should be "lose".
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