Typos and missing word corrected. Thanks for the assist.

The schedule is a good idea. Unfortunately, the way things are planned, it doesn't get started until after that frustration kettle boils over.

Three words: Butterfly Energy Constructs.

With the art - I figured she could always do both. They would both sell well. But I like the hidden surprise of the easteregg artwork - it's like a special treat.

>>I enjoyed this.It does a good job of balancing between the frustrations and the curiosity.>>

Yay!

I'm glad it's coming across.