Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad that Keisuke sounds like a distinct person. Since I'm still learning that was a concern.
>>Your family dynamics make a wonderful counterpoint!>>
*grins* Since we believe in telling all the stories, I figured we needed supportive, solid families in the mix too.
Just a warning, if Haruko meets Tsubasa's parents, particularly if his parents are in the mix, he might find himself adopted by caring strangers again with no idea how it happened. And his parents set for a rude awakening. Sora Inoue is a tiny, polite, soft-spoken woman but there is steel under that silk and people would be wise to remember that.
Re: Another voice
>>Your family dynamics make a wonderful counterpoint!>>
*grins* Since we believe in telling all the stories, I figured we needed supportive, solid families in the mix too.
Just a warning, if Haruko meets Tsubasa's parents, particularly if his parents are in the mix, he might find himself adopted by caring strangers again with no idea how it happened. And his parents set for a rude awakening. Sora Inoue is a tiny, polite, soft-spoken woman but there is steel under that silk and people would be wise to remember that.