Typos and missing word corrected. Thanks for the assist.
The schedule is a good idea. Unfortunately, the way things are planned, it doesn't get started until after that frustration kettle boils over.
Three words: Butterfly Energy Constructs.
With the art - I figured she could always do both. They would both sell well. But I like the hidden surprise of the easteregg artwork - it's like a special treat.
>>I enjoyed this.It does a good job of balancing between the frustrations and the curiosity.>>
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Re: Thoughts
Date: 2015-12-19 01:47 am (UTC)The schedule is a good idea. Unfortunately, the way things are planned, it doesn't get started until after that frustration kettle boils over.
Three words: Butterfly Energy Constructs.
With the art - I figured she could always do both. They would both sell well. But I like the hidden surprise of the easteregg artwork - it's like a special treat.
>>I enjoyed this.It does a good job of balancing between the frustrations and the curiosity.>>
Yay!
I'm glad it's coming across.