Date: 2016-07-03 05:27 am (UTC)
thnidu: "ND" disarmament symbol, and "Fiat Pax" (let there be peace) (peace)
From: [personal profile] thnidu
I'm glad to see this working out so well, and Tsubasa able to plan going further.

• but she also dreading their arrival.
-> was also dreading (or) also dreaded

• She was afraid
that they will hate her now.
-> would hate

• she looked good in ^ sari.
?^ a

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